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-73kb

omggg

why is xxxsky 400kb

Really? I didnt notice that, i fix it later

I wondering why it was 600kb xd

-366kb

mini skip

I think these hooks are too narrow and unfair, I would like them to be easier to hit

hooks now easier

Sometimes there isn't enough speed to get off the platform

This edge feels like you're being knocked out of the flow; you're first flying left at high speed, and then you're landing on a right edge For me, it's better to do a left edge

miniskip

This edge feels bad because of the weird timing, you need to press 2 quick jumps otherwise you'll get into a freeze, which is bad for me

Overall, the map is decent, it has an idea, but it's still repetitive and short. It would be better if the map had more mechanics than just hook, edge, and laser I think

hmmm

still possible btw

almost identical moves 1 by 1

maybe u can make tp2 part with better flow? I tried to do some example

i just don't really like the fact that u have to stop immediately after u "spawned" on the part just to make a hook

btw this 2 parts also simillar and goes 1 by 1

maybe add 1 unhook here also, but im not sure, it might make part a lil bit easier

you can skip laser and just go like that

or u can also skip part like this

repetative, skips, flow breakers

other than that map is fun to play

сan i just add switch doors? for fix skips like this

I'm not sure that is the best decision. Only to close skips - no. Make it a part of the map's mechanics - yes.

But reconstruct your map to fit new mechanic just to close skips idk

I kinda feel Edge Jump Pro vibes on this map, but I'm not sure if u should make it harder by making some switch-doors-things. If you can make this map more speedrun-flow-like map without actual focus on some hard edge moves IMO it promises good future for the map.

In last part there is blue tp, idk how i can change this part

some good ideas here but the spacing on your parts is really frustrating sometimes

also your parts are unbalanced. you can also just order them differently so it gets easier to harder

I would try to leave only the top part visible, to show which part should be hooked. Sometimes people hook only the bottom part and don't understand why it doesn't fit.

cool map

but

There are difficult parts that are behind us, and other easy parts that are ahead of us, so it's a bit unbalanced.

and this too

Skip

This place is not needed

Little skip

moving holding A from tele doesnt go in the hole, just put a tile to make it easier to go in

cool map, i think 10 and 15 are the loosest, kinda multiple ways/confusing

i didnt really experience the spacing issue louis said but i think the first part is like really annoying to get run speed cus tpto is too close

just make top tele wall here align with the bottom one and extend the unhook left 1 tile too

then u can just start holding A

for me i always had to have run speed to get a good swing

i feel like there's a better way to force this bottom edge landing rather than just making it 1 tile too low, because it feels a bit troll to someone playing the first time

if you make it 2 tiles too low, its more clear there's way too little space to jump, and then you can remove some of the middle tele, keeping the precision.

for me, i didnt notice the ground jump would be too high, maybe others didnt experience this but i didnt feel like "haha you got me" i just felt kinda annoyed

if the map is more balanced towards being generally as hard as the hardest parts, then this doesnt really matter

i also think the map has more flow if you force a lower jump, because you dont have to press A as much to land here

only part i didnt really get for the spacing was this. it feels like i have to dodge the lower part of the wall in order to get enough height

idk if that's intended but it feels harder than the others

after practicing it more it doesnt feel as hard but i would make it more obvious that you should jump since the way its mapped kinda feels flow-ish to just walk off

and i think conveying that "corners are good" for the ends of the parts is non-intuitive if the intended method is to dodge the first corner here.

if you put tele in that corner, make it so you have to jump, all problems with this part go away for me

i also dont like the ending (doesnt align with a wall like the others) but u could change it like this (removing all that blue stuff and putting the drop with speed right)

or, if u want to keep this way, just remove this pointless stuff anyway and put a corner here

good map, the usage of blue tele is unreasonable on a single part, i suggest to change part by moving the hole to left

also i don't like the decision of stealing bg from ravillion, please change that

design bug (corners)

or a third way, if you want to keep this pointless platform, you can force them to go there by putting tele covering the hole, then use dj to the left

?

yeah i guess that's fine

forgot to delete unused entities

can i change mapper name?

Yes

how

testers can change it, just tell me what you want to change it to and what exactly

веселуhа

ty

miniskip

https://discord.com/channels/252358080522747904/1478407898181664870/1484895227599650928 https://discord.com/channels/252358080522747904/1478407898181664870/1484896383298306160 It's still there

You can also skip another edge if you don't skip the first one

you can skip the edge

This downward ledge stands out quite strongly and doesn't fit into the overall style of the map, in my opinion. You can move the entire ceiling by 1 block so that it is level with the ledge (if this interferes with the gameplay, don't do this, but I tested it and it doesn't seem to matter)

It's better to raise the ceiling here by 1 block, in my opinion, because sometimes I flew into tp

You can easily skip a laser shot when you're flying to the right

I think it's better to raise the edge 2 blocks up here, so you don't have to wait until you fall, but rather stand on it right away

You can skip this area

The map is pretty short right now, it's better to make more parts with this teleport mechanic at the end, otherwise adding it to just one part is weird

I also don't understand why you need deep on the transitions between parts, but if you want to keep it, add unfreeze on the spawn

you can skip 2 edges at once

And the map will be very unpleasant for speedrunning, on almost all parts you can skip 1-2 jumps and end up in a hole without a wall, which is very unpleasant, but saves a lot of time, as for me, the parts needs to be worked on so that it can be completed only as intended by the author

and you can skip edge

I also don't particularly like the very long transitions between parts. While you don't really feel them when you're going through them, when you speedrun, the entire tempo is lost, which is bad for me

Overall, I liked the map. It still feels short, but the problem with the variety of parts has become less noticeable, which is good

yeah this has like 5 ways to do it, i think all edges should be forced or they should be removed

i told him to change this, i think a better way would be a 1/2 tile tele wall instead of dropping the ceiling down

kinda troll suggestion but, i think it's better english to write "OnlyGoesDown" or "GoesDownOnly", rather than "GoesOnlyDown", and i would say that order is from most to least natural sounding

OnlyDownGoes

Nixus

Bright Descent

themix name for themix design

If you want, i can completely redesign map

its fine

i like design it looks good and cloud mapres doesnt directly make it a copy of other designs

i fixed everything

this hook requires too precise hook from the player compare to all

agreed ^

also that move is kinda tight, i cheated it by using dj before i did legit

tp 8 is slightly too tight / spacing is kinda weird

some corners

cool map btw

make more parts with blue tele mechanic :D

Above-mentioned hook on cp 4 is fine imo Please adjust the start/finish line design to be more obvious

Cool map!

2*?

Ye

neutral map

(I didn't played map)

Why? Maybe a bit of feedback would be nice to improve map

oh I meant to type that into the search bar to see what makes a map bad sorry 💀 discord moment

made more space and some changes in some parts.

Some corners

I think it would look better to relocate them to the place I marked. But it's just my thoughts about it

I passed this part without using that hook tile. Not sure if it's really necessary there.

I really like the map. There are some simple but interesting parts, and the map is balanced imo (for me it's 2*)

I played through your map and for me its not much to change. the flow was nice and it felt interesting to play whole way through.

the only thing I want to add is this jump

is very tight and unpleasent to play atleast for me

this part is also super interesting but misses some flow. the laser is super low so its hard to aim

and I gain alot of speed and hit this thing

but this is just small nitpicks. very cool map

why are there 2 hookables in this part, i ended up only using the one on the right

fire map btw i didnt really notice any gameplay issues

already adressed as what I can see

Could improve that swing on CP9. The Cut-Off Point feels not that good and could be improved imo. Maybe Put the Platform on the right one tile more to the right (so the hook gets a little longer)

Good tests,

please make sure to acknowledge any matter pointed out and add a changelog that includes details on what you didn't fix and why

https://discord.com/channels/252358080522747904/1478407898181664870/1526175964986609754 , https://discord.com/channels/252358080522747904/1478407898181664870/1526195097228804258 i don't actually feel like the 5th part needs any changes, the first two hookables work well for the beginning, since the left one uses a swing down to gain more speed, and the right one helps you go up using with the speed gained from the left hookable

having two hookables here would be more comfy for nobos, since the map is a 2* and mostly relies on swings

this part has quite a big difficulty spike compared to other ones, the green swing felt a bit "abrupt" to me, so even if i hooked it and swinged, most of the time i'd get stuck in the red thingys

might just be a skill issue

this part felt a bit cramped in comparison to others

would be nice having the "cloud bg" layer marked as HD since there's another layer that serves as a bg as well

please add back credits to ravie's tileset

nice solo map, i couldn't really notice anything else